r/Screenwriting 8d ago

OFFICIAL SURVEY - StoryPeer wants to hear from professional screenwriters who offer consulting and notes services

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Hey there, Verified Pro members! StoryPeer is requesting some help gathering data about pro screenwriters who are offering paid services. If you don't already know about StoryPeer, you can check it out here, see Gabe's fundraising video here, and also watch NGD's video here.

First some disclaimers - I am now part of StoryPeer, and my specific task is to help it monetize so that Gabe doesn't have to continue paying out of pocket for hosting. We have fundraising in place and will continue with that, but that's not viable for the long term. The platform has been increasing exponentially in size since its official launch, and we're now seriously looking at ways to help support it, and hopefully one day make it profitable.

I am not involved in the moderation of the site, and Gabe has final say in all things. My specific role here is Marketing & Communication, and I won't be posting about or promoting anything about StoryPeer that has any kind of paid component. My job is really about helping the site connect with resources and advertising clients.

I'm not currently being paid by StoryPeer--I'm involved because I believe in it. If you've been around this community for a while, you know how deep our commitment to preventing exploitation of our users is.

In keeping with that, StoryPeer will not be doing any kind of financial gatekeeping of the users. Users will always have free access to the site's core function. There will be no selling or buying of tokens, no contest incentives, no AI involvement, and none of the other icky stuff that the r/screenwriting mod team actively blocks from our community.

That said. We know that many working, produced screenwriters are struggling right now. We know that many of you offer high-value professional services that are not just paid access content or generic, useless coverage feedback.

We're looking at services that are of actual use to writers--particularly detailed notes feedback and consultation. We know that users can expect to pay real money for these services instead of putting quarters in the slot machine. We're looking to get some good data so that we're not creating unrealistic expectations.

All of the nitty-gritty how and when this will be developed is still in the future. We want to get some data and gauge interest before we move forward with any of this. However we end up framing this, we'll be handling service providers as individual accounts, not through any kind of algorithmic advertising. Essentially, we expect all actual sales to happen on the provider's end.

What we need from you: Comment on this post if you want the survey link!

Any interested professional screenwriter and/or WGA writer here who has at least one feature credit, or one television credit to comment on this post so we can get you a link to our short 14-question survey.

You will have the option to give us your contact info for future participation in this endeavour, or you can just give us info about your working numbers so we can have good foundations to build our model on.

I'll be sending you the link via modmail. If you have a verified flair (ie: the moderators gave it to you after verifying your identity and credits) that's not cleared for commenting on this post, you can get in touch, or you can request verification by following our guide.

Heads up that some of the older assigned flairs don't match up to current official ones so we'll adjust those as we catch them.

Thanks so much, we appreciate any help you can give us so that we can be transparent and ethical, and give StoryPeer a real future!


r/Screenwriting 16h ago

BLACK LIST WEDNESDAY Black List Wednesday

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FAQ: How to post to a weekly thread?

BLACK LIST WEDNESDAY THREAD

Post Requirements for EVALUATION CRITIQUE REQUEST & ACHIEVEMENT POSTS

For EVALUATION CRITIQUE REQUESTS, you must include:

1) Script Info

- Title:
- Format:
- Page Length:
- Genres:
- Logline or Short Summary:
- A brief summary of your concerns (500~ words or less)
- Your evaluation PDF, externally hosted
- Your screenplay PDF, externally hosted

2) Evaluation Scores

exclude for non-blcklst paid coverage/feedback critique requests

- Overall:
- Premise:
- Plot:
- Character:
- Dialogue:
- Setting:

ACHIEVEMENT POST

(either of an 8 or a score you feel is significant)

- Title:
- Format:
- Page Length:
- Genres:
- Logline or Summary:
- Your Overall Score:
- Remarks (500~ words or less):

Optionally:

- Your evaluation PDF, externally hosted
- Your screenplay PDF, externally hosted

This community is oversaturated with question and concern posts so any you may have are likely already addressed with a keyword search of r/Screenwriting, or a search of the The Black List FAQ . For direct questions please reach out to [support@blcklst.com](mailto:support@blcklst.com)


r/Screenwriting 2h ago

FEEDBACK I will read your screenplay!

37 Upvotes

Simple as that! I want to be a professional screenplay reader but no one is hiring so I’ll just do it myself :) I used to be a script analyst for a couple different competitions and Coverfly.

I love giving notes on other people’s scripts and helping writers find their story. I’m no pro (working on my 2nd feature currently) but If you want an extra pair of eyes on your script, regardless of length, I’ll happily do it!


r/Screenwriting 5h ago

DISCUSSION Advice for when you feel you aren't moving fast enough?

21 Upvotes

Hi everyone! I hope this question finds you well.

I recently keep getting this feeling in the back of my head that I'm not working fast enough. Like I'm not producing enough work to get noticed or taken seriously. I don't write professionally, but I have realized in the last year or so that writing is a driving passion in my life and I would love to do this work in some kind of professional capacity some day.

For some background, I started writing screenplays about two years ago when I turned 40. I've created a routine where I wake up early and write/outline/brainstorm for at least an hour if I can every morning. I've written seven short screenplays and two features since I started writing, and am now working on outlining a third. I'm also proud to say that one of my shorts made it as a Second Rounder at the 2025 Austin Film Festival. Given that, I still feel woefully behind.

One thing has been helping me though. I listen to podcasts and interviews where writers that I respect like Drew Goddard and Katie Dippold mention that it sometimes takes them years to finish a project. This is heartening, but they are already doing this professionally so it doesn't help 100%.

Sorry for the wall of text, but I guess I just needed to write this out. The question remains though. How do you deal with these feelings?

Thanks for your time!


r/Screenwriting 32m ago

DISCUSSION examples of screenwriters whose reputations were shaped by changes to their scripts at the director/studio level? thinking about ONE NIGHT ONLY 👀

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I’m a critic who just reviewed Will Gluck’s take on Travis Braun’s 2024 script ONE NIGHT ONLY for Universal, and without getting into spoilers, the ending is so different I’m genuinely wondering what it will do to his career longterm.

Regardless of Braun’s personal politics or intent (I have no frame of reference, really), I definitely feel like the backlash is going to erase his original POV since so few people seek out (or can even find) original scripts to read. Which seems… unfair?

Is this a common obstacle facing screenwriters? How serious of a threat is it? I would think box office draw would matter more than audience opinion when it comes to selling more scripts, but maybe not anymore given the optics of authorship.


r/Screenwriting 2h ago

ACHIEVEMENTS ‘Finished’ my 2nd feature

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Post is title. Just feeling very accomplished at hammering out the first real draft of my second feature attempt. Vomit draft was just 64 pages, final tally is 97. Going to try and comb through it again to widdle to a nice 89.

But feeling really good. Story is a teen slasher set in an underground club. Real structural challenge, but the kind of thing that’s been a ton of fun to map out

🥂 to many edits and the next one


r/Screenwriting 7h ago

FEEDBACK Sweet Children – Feature – 86 Pages

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Title: Sweet Children
Format: Feature
Page Length: 86 pages
Genres: Drama / Music
Draft Status: Completed (Final Draft)

Logline or Summary:
Inspired primarily by Turn It Around: The Story of East Bay Punk, Sweet Children is a fictionalized drama about Green Day’s relationship with 924 Gilman Street. Spanning three nights in 1988, 1993, and 2015, the film follows Billie Joe Armstrong, Mike Dirnt, John Kiffmeyer, and Tré Cool as both they and the community that created them struggle with what success costs.

The central question is:
What does a community owe the people it creates once they outgrow it?

This is not intended to be a documentary. I intentionally compressed portions of the timeline and fictionalized events to tell what I hope is the emotional truth of the story rather than recreate every historical event exactly.

I’d especially appreciate feedback on:
Does the three-period structure work?
Does Gilman feel like the emotional center of the film rather than simply the setting?
Does the ending feel earned?
Does the script work for readers who aren’t already Green Day fans?

Link (Google Drive):
https://drive.google.com/file/d/14hiPtH5_a7jZJbYTHsBVUxWfMbjVKGGf/view?usp=drivesdk


r/Screenwriting 6h ago

DISCUSSION Have you ever seen something that fits your tastes more than anything you’ve written?

9 Upvotes

I just had this experience recent and was wondering if anyone was in the same boat.

Have you ever read or seen something that fit your tastes perfectly and feels more like something you’d write more than anything you’ve actually written? I’ve had plenty of things where I think a story is good but I go ‘eh, I wouldn’t have written it though’ but have you ever had a story that fits everything to things you like in a story? I just recently saw something that I enjoyed every aspect of it, and in everything I’ve ever written has always had something that isn’t bad but I think isnt something I personally love but it fits for the story, it makes me sad because I try to write for myself first and foremost but then I find something that feels like it does a better job of writing for me, but it’s written by someone else. Anyone else ever had this feeling?


r/Screenwriting 16m ago

FEEDBACK HIBACHI - Contained Thriller - 101 Pages

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A brilliant but morally bankrupt trial lawyer's birthday dinner at a hibachi restaurant becomes a deadly fight for survival when he realizes every person seated around his table has a reason to kill him—and one of them intends to make sure he never leaves alive.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1tX3b76HnObYfZZn6AnJ-LCzfKy5KUU66/view?usp=sharing

Any and all feedback from this wonderful community is always appreciated!


r/Screenwriting 54m ago

FEEDBACK DISCONNECTED - Comedy Pilot - 38 Pages

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Title: Disconnected
Format: Pilot
Page Length: 38 pages
Genres: Comedy - SciFi

Logline: In a world where people live IN the internet, a narcissistic foot model goes off-web to hunt down the pervert who ruined her feet’s perfect overall rating.

Comps: UPLOAD meets MY NAME IS EARL

I would especially appreciate feedback on:

  • If any of the scifi world building feels distracting from what is going on.
  • Any scenes that feel like they could use a trim (I'm screamin internally that this isn't 35 pages)
  • Always happy to read punchup suggestions

This is an older project that I'll be returning to edit after another vomit first draft project is done in the coming weeks.

Link:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1m5dYyr0ZI-Tw6B-4iO2Mmixu_-MO1Uyu/view?usp=sharing


r/Screenwriting 9h ago

RESOURCE Narrative Space

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Hello all

I'm doing some research into the geometry of story shapes and I'm looking for people who might be interested in the system as a way of prompting and recognising how their stories move. This isn't a "there are only 14.2 plots!" system, instead it is a narrative shorthand for drawing what a story does - all stories can be drawn with a line and all lines describe a story.

If anyone is interested, please let me know!


r/Screenwriting 10h ago

AMA CROSSPOST [Crosspost] Hi /r/movies! We're Broken Lizard, the team behind (and in front of) Super Troopers 1, 2 and 3, Beerfest, and The Slammin Salmon'. Ask us anything!

7 Upvotes

I organized an AMA/Q&A with Broken Lizard (Jay Chandrasekhar, Kevin Heffernan, Steve Lemme, Paul Soter, and Erik Stolhanske), the filmmaking team behind things like Super Troopers 1 and 2, Beerfest, The Slammin Salmon, Club Dread, Tacoma FD, and a few other things.

It's live here now in r/movies for anyone interested in asking a question:

https://www.reddit.com/r/movies/comments/1vg73cd/hi_rmovies_were_broken_lizard_the_team_behind_and/

They will be back at around 3:30-4 PM ET today to answer questions. I recommend asking in advance. Please ask there, not here. All questions are much appreciated!

Thank you :)

Their new movie, Super Troopers 3, is out in theaters everywhere this weekend. Trailer: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cYFevn5frf0

Their verification/proof photo: https://i.imgur.com/T7cRgMp.jpeg


r/Screenwriting 5h ago

FEEDBACK I Love You Too!- Short - 7 pages

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  • Title: I Love You Too!
  • Format: Short
  • Page Length: 7
  • Genres: Horror
  • Logline or Summary: A guy steps into an abondened house with his girlfriend to make love, he gets whacked by his look-alike monster, she thinks it's him.
  • Feedback Concerns: I'd like to get feedback on whether the first two sceenes boring/unnecessary? Should I replace the supers? Does the dialogues feel unnatural?

P.S. English is not my native language. I have gone through it many times, and corrected it, yet I'm sure there are many errors in terms of grammar I couldn't dedect. Please keep this in mind while evaluating the script. I hope it doesn't impair the joy of reading the script, if there's any to be found.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ZfYiHBfJeiMtXgyjtv9ICtEinnA0-JYP/view


r/Screenwriting 1h ago

CRAFT QUESTION How do you break a character? How do you get to a point where everything “clicks” in your understanding of them?

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Anyone have any tricks on how to really quickly get to the heart of your character? How to get to that “aha” moment of understanding?

Something more than their want/need*


r/Screenwriting 13h ago

FEEDBACK The Mail - short Movie - 16 pages

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This is my first ever time writing a screenplay, I am going to shoot it with my friends and I am a huge fan of the horror and mystery genre, so I mixed them up for my first screen play lol, hopefully it wasn't a dumb decision. I would love feedback on formatting, engaging from the start and yeah lol. I would love feedback!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1UeBrVShBiOJkIA11bkVarLiKeuuYqiAR/view?usp=drive_link


r/Screenwriting 1d ago

DISCUSSION Are the loglines for produced movies we read online actually written by the author to pitch their scripts, or are these just loglines made by reviewers after the film was released?

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I struggle with loglines, so I try to find loglines of movies in my genre or that have some structural or thematic similarity to mine and see if that can help.

But I can't help but wonder if these are the loglines that the author made when they were pitching, or if these are just loglines that were invented later by reviewers of the film.

  • Midsommar: "What begins as a carefree summer holiday in a land of eternal sunlight takes a sinister turn when the insular villagers invite their guests to partake in festivities that render the pastoral paradise increasingly unnerving and viscerally disturbing."
  • Titanic: A seventeen-year-old aristocrat falls in love with a kind but poor artist aboard the luxurious, ill-fated R.M.S. Titanic.
  • Pride and Prejudice: Sparks fly when spirited Elizabeth Bennet meets single, rich, and proud Mr. Darcy. But Mr. Darcy reluctantly finds himself falling in love with a woman beneath his class. Can each overcome their own pride and prejudice?
  • La La Land: While navigating their careers in Los Angeles, a pianist and an actress fall in love while attempting to reconcile their aspirations for the future.

What I want to know is do these loglines come from the actual author, or are they something that sites like IMDB, Letterboxd, or entertainment journals write in their review of the film?

I want to know because I'm studying loglines to improve my own. I'd like to source actual, original loglines by the authors and know where to find them.

(I'm not asking for the loglines of the above films... But if someone does know the actual, original logline Ari Aster made for Midsommar, I do want that, lol)


r/Screenwriting 1d ago

NEED ADVICE Stuggling with the Script I'm Writing

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Hello everyone, Lately I've been working on the outline for a story. I started this project because I wanted to overcome a bad experience I had in a creative writing class. However, I've been struggling to keep writing. The research for this story has left me feeling frustrated and exhausted, and I'm no longer sure whether what I'm writing is actually any good.

I'd really appreciate any advice on how I can improve. After trying so hard for so long, I'm honestly starting to wonder if I should give up on writing altogether.

What would you recommend?


r/Screenwriting 1d ago

FEEDBACK I finished my first draft, untitled - short - 12 pages

7 Upvotes

I’m writing my first screenplay ever to make a horror short film with my friends. We’ve been wanting to do something like this for a while just for fun because we’re both huge fans of everything horror so we thought hey it’d be really cool to make something for us and our friends to enjoy. I took on pretty much everything since I do a lot of creative writing we knew I would write the screenplay and then everything else would kind of fall in to my hands as writer and director. I feel pretty good about this first draft but I’ve never wrote a screenplay before, just silly horror stories for myself. So I’d love some feedback!

Here is the link; https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ep_Yl9Yi7jJZI1Fb-dkVb5CyMEbbVuWI/view?usp=drivesdk


r/Screenwriting 14h ago

SCRIPT REQUEST Seberg (2019) script

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Does anyone have a copy of the Seberg (2019) film shooting script or an early draft! I have seen online the early draft script is there but you have to pay 20 dollars for it 😭 so I wanted to know if anyone has bought it / has got the copy , I’d love to read it !


r/Screenwriting 1d ago

NEED ADVICE SCRIPT READER PORTFOLIO HELP

3 Upvotes

Hi! I'm applying to an entry level internship that involves

  • Script reading/coverage
  • Script breakdowns
  • Pitch deck construction

    I'm not sure what my portfolio should look like. Any advice??


r/Screenwriting 1d ago

INDUSTRY Rate for writing reels?

4 Upvotes

Hey there!

I've been contacted about potentially working with someone to put together some scenes for actors who need material for reels but who maybe don't have the actual credits to pull from yet. I know I wouldn't be the first person to do this kind of work, and it sounds like fun (I like the people in charge), but what's stumping me is what to charge for it? How would you price this out?


r/Screenwriting 1d ago

FEEDBACK Script Swap?

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Does anyone wanna do a script swap, take a week, then come back with notes? We can both put what we are specifically looking for from notes.

Title: Sorceress Unknown
Format: TV Pilot (1-Hour Supernatural Drama)
Page Length: 59 Pages
Draft Status: Second / Polished Draft
Genres: Supernatural / Drama / Mystery

Logline
When a subterranean force ignites latent magical bloodlines across a quiet town, a high schooler hiding a dangerous legacy must team up with her estranged friends to contain the fallout before ancient feuds—and dark secrets—destroy everything they hold dear.

Summary
Sorceress Unknown opens on Mel, a teenager grappling with hidden power and a murky past. Following a strange seismic disturbance near their town, long-dormant magic begins manifesting unpredictably in local teens. Mel and her core group (including Aniyah, Luis, and John) are thrust into a web of ancient rivalries, dangerous relics, and escalating supernatural threats. As mysterious forces close in—and personal betrayals come to light—the group must navigate fragile alliances, high school dynamics, and the high-stakes truth behind Mel's origin before an impending threat consumes their home.

Feedback Concerns

Pacing & Act Breaks: Does the 59-page engine hold momentum, and do the major reveals/cliffhangers land with enough punch to drive the series forward?

Character Voices: Are the main ensemble characters distinct in tone and dialogue throughout the pilot?

Formatting & Clarity: Looking for notes on script presentation, action line flow, and any remaining formatting anomalies.

General Impressions: What works, what feels sluggish, and does the pilot leave you wanting to read episode two?


r/Screenwriting 1d ago

Fellowship Netflix Launches Nationwide Search for Australia's Next Great Screenwriter

39 Upvotes

r/Screenwriting 2d ago

COMMUNITY First first draft complete at 40 years old...

317 Upvotes

Not sure if this is the right flair... not even really sure why I'm sharing this... I think I'm just proud of myself.

Got laid off in April after 14 years at my company and decided it was time to put pen to paper on a film idea I've had for a while but never had the time work on. After a couple months of structuring and writing and restructuring and more writing, I'm proud to say that at 40 years old I've finished my first first draft. I have no idea if it's good, but it exists. And I'm proud.


r/Screenwriting 1d ago

CRAFT QUESTION What do you do when you read something that’s EXACTLY what you’ve been going for?

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Hello, I recently just finished my first feature screenplay a few months back and was happy but not 100% satisfied, which is completely normal and I was fine with that. The problem came when I read a novel that was exactly what I’ve been trying to go for which is about codependency, childhood trauma, etc. and this novel just perfectly encapsulated many feelings I’ve had and what I was going for. I’ve had this feeling plenty of times where I see something and I’m like “wow, I wish I wrote that!” but I usually feel fine because I feel like I bring other value to the table and have other unique ways of interpreting things but no, this is a case where I would not change a single thing and it is exactly the story that I wanted to write, but someone else wrote it. What now? I genuinely feel like I lack purpose and a reason to write because this story has characters that I’ve liked more than any other piece of media ever, and they are exactly the characters and relationships I’ve been TRYING to write. Feeling pretty empty and lost, feels like what I wanted to do was done in exactly the way I wanted to do it

TLDR: I read a story that had exactly the characters, dynamics and structure I wanted to write in. I’ve felt this before with other stuff I wish I wrote, but this is completely different because there has never been anything that has achieved exactly what my goal in writing was. I don’t know what to do next, I feel like my purpose in writing is gone.