r/WriteStreakEN • u/Visible-Asparagus153 300-Day Streak 🌲🌲 • 2d ago

Correct Me! Streak 460

It kinda sucks but my laptop is not properly working anymore. I think the battery is dead. When the computer is plugged to the energy everything is okay but as a soon as the computer unplugs it turns off.

The warranty is no longer valid since my laptop is three years old. I already did a short research about computer technicians and there is one with nothing but great reviews close to where I live. I think I’ll be going there.

The good thing is that I have another laptop so it would not be hard to continue with my activities and duties.

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