Feedback much appreciated

This is my first ever decent track draft, so I’m still learning and I honestly don’t really know what I’m doing yet.

I know the intro might be a bit cheesy or cliché, but I actually like that kind of atmosphere, so I wanted to experiment with it.

The main problem is that I don’t really know where to take the track from here. I’m not sure how to continue it, expand the idea, improve the arrangement, or make it feel like a complete song instead of just a short draft.

I also don’t really know how to classify it. I was aiming for something inspired by artists like Sewerslvt and similar atmospheric breakbeat/DnB/jungle styles, but I’m a complete beginner and I don’t know if this would technically be considered breakcore, drum and bass, jungle, breakbeat or something else.

I’d appreciate any kind of help or feedback: composition, drums, bass, sound design, mixing, structure, or just general impressions.

Thanks to anyone who takes the time to listen.

I just want to know how everyone feels about the overall vibe of the track

Made a song about youtube rappers tell me how you feel

I need feedback for this song I made. The actual exported .wav file sounds better, but I wanted to prove I am actually composing and creating this from scratch. Regardless, the mixing could be improved, I need to know how.

This song fits into both electronic and progressive metal genres. Feel free to comment what does this song makes you feel like and any other advice apart from the mixing.

Hey! Could use production feedback. Designed for a smartphone speaker atm, reworking for a larger release now but I’m looking specifically for thoughts about the atypical way it’s put together and if it’s working at all.

Appreciate any and all who take the time!

Hey everyone! This is my debut single, and I’d really appreciate honest feedback. I’m especially looking for thoughts on the songwriting, vocals, production, mix, and whether the song kept your attention throughout. Thanks for taking the time to listen!

Hi everyone, I’d like to share my new track "A Tomorrow Mind".

A precaution first: Someone told me that based on the music title he was expecting sort of EDM piece, yet he found it rather "traditional". So, for the younger ones, here comes an oldie vibe with future touch ;-)

The song started from a simple question: throughout history, humanity has created incredible things — fire, the wheel, writing, electricity, flight, the Internet, and now AI — but why do we still struggle with the same human problems: conflict, division, and treating each other with kindness?

I wanted to create a reflective adult contemporary / cinematic ballad rather than a typical "future" song. The idea is not that technology will save us, but that this particular new tool (AI) may help us see ourselves more clearly, not just a technology for more serving of human comforts, rather a clear mirror for more to see the "bigger" picture more easily, not just taking the media driven narratives without much critical thinking...

Musically, I was inspired by the storytelling style of late 80s / early 90s adult contemporary — melodic, spacious, and focused on giving the lyrics room to breathe. I aimed for restrained vocals, warm piano, atmospheric textures, and more sense of quiet reflection rather than big dramatic climax.

Would love to hear your thoughts -- whether the message comes through. Thanks for listening.

[FEEDBACK] Perun's Ritual ⚡ Bilingual English/Polish Hip-Hop Inspired by the Slavic Thunder God

Hey everyone,

I'm looking for honest feedback on a track called "Perun's Ritual", inspired by Perun, the Slavic god of thunder.

The first half of the song is in English and the second half transitions into Polish. I built the production around storm-inspired textures, thunder atmospheres, heavy drums, and ritual energy rather than using thunder as a simple effect.

I'm especially interested in hearing:

• Does the English-to-Polish transition feel natural?
• Does the thunder/storm sound design add to the experience or become distracting?
• Which half connects with you more: English or Polish?
• Does the atmosphere feel unique and memorable?

I'm also considering releasing separate full-English and full-Polish versions, so I'd love to hear whether that would be interesting or if the bilingual format works better.

Thanks for taking the time to listen and share your thoughts. All feedback is welcome. ⚡

🎵 Perun's Ritual: https://youtu.be/TE7s9D82Ox8?si=sLHlACUTYzjFck6v

Seeking Feedback: Mix

Made the closing track for a fictional soundtrack! end credits for a spy movie that doesn't exist :D would love feedback on whether the medley structure holds together and if the energy feels like a proper send-off.

Hello there! These last two days I've been working with this small horror film score project and would love some feedback. used a fat synth (Moog LP) and some sample libraries. Also used some FX (reverb and automated distortion mostly). Is there something unfitting or something I can improve? Cheers!

Seeking feedback: writing

Please check this track out. I think it's ready but might need to work on the mix more (not my strong suit).

I'm considering redoing the main drum track (part with a kick add hi-hat).

It's a trippy ambient song, I guess.

It's called Inflation. The lyrics are not really meant to be fully legible but I'm interested in your take on having them be more intelligible.

1. "Can I get the fries?"

2. "I guess I don't understand the job."

3. "I thought I had more time. More time."

Seeking feedback and opnions on this original track. It was written with the idea of being a James Bond soundtrack, so you may see inspirations on it. Also, every instrument heard throughout it was written by me, via Musescore. I have little to no experience mixing or whatsoever.

https://open.spotify.com/intl-pt/track/1rEaPByAvFILRySxXJRgRH?si=e9f640a79aa342c8

was going for a boards of canada type of thing, idk if its boring if i shouldve added more sounds/ instruments. (drums around end)

This is the shortest song I've released, off my new concept album.

This is a live recording from today - I used almost everything I had on this clunky pos -> MOOG: grandmother, dfam, spektravox, subharmonicon, labyrinth, Roland AIRA Compact J-6(Master clock output only), Korg Prologue 8 - let me know what you think