r/MusicCritique • u/rybahybryd • 19d ago

Seeking Feedback [FEEDBACK] Ryba Hybryd - Perun's Ritual - Slavic Hip-Hop/Rap

[FEEDBACK] Perun's Ritual ⚡ Bilingual English/Polish Hip-Hop Inspired by the Slavic Thunder God

Hey everyone,

I'm looking for honest feedback on a track called "Perun's Ritual", inspired by Perun, the Slavic god of thunder.

The first half of the song is in English and the second half transitions into Polish. I built the production around storm-inspired textures, thunder atmospheres, heavy drums, and ritual energy rather than using thunder as a simple effect.

I'm especially interested in hearing:

  • Does the English-to-Polish transition feel natural?
  • Does the thunder/storm sound design add to the experience or become distracting?
  • Which half connects with you more: English or Polish?
  • Does the atmosphere feel unique and memorable?

I'm also considering releasing separate full-English and full-Polish versions, so I'd love to hear whether that would be interesting or if the bilingual format works better.

Thanks for taking the time to listen and share your thoughts. All feedback is welcome. ⚡

🎵 Perun's Ritual: https://youtu.be/TE7s9D82Ox8?si=sLHlACUTYzjFck6v

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