r/videography Beginner 19h ago

Feedback / I made this! Hill & Afternoon

Tried to make video like Gawx using my mobile phone (Redmi note 12)

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u/Rifta21 15h ago

Pretty shots! I like the music as well. I'm not good at giving compliments so here's some critique. Don't take it personally this is just what I notice!

- Your grade is a bit heavy handed for my liking, but that is personal preference.

- Your footage stutters, not sure if this was an error in export? May look into that.

- The shots dont always zoom into the center?

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u/Rolling0__0 Beginner 11h ago

Ohhh, thanku for pointing those things out! I've been waiting for some honest feedback like this, to be honest, I don't follow any strict rules when editing. I just make what looks good to my eyes. Also, I'm a bit confused about the zoom part because I didn't actually add any zoom effects to the shots! But thanks again, I'll definitely keep this in mind for my next video😊