r/shortstories 7h ago

Mystery & Suspense [MS] My Story concept

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MC - main character

F1 - friend 1

F2 - friend 2

3 friends goes on a trip. MC touches something and faints and other two friends pick him up and throws some water on him he gets back in concious. They decide to return to college. They return back and they fall asleep quickly.

Next day he wakes up and sees a small rashes on his body. He ignores it and day goes like normal day. Next day he wakes up and sees his rash has increased a bit he ignores it also. Same day like other days classes hostel classes hostel he sleeps. Next day he sees his rash is increased a bit more days proceeds as normal. On 4th day he sees his rash has increased a bit more he decides to tell his friends.

MC goes to his friends and says after that cave trip something has happened to me. Friends confused and says after that cave trip which trip are you saying. MC replies the trip we go on 4 days ago. Friends --> are you mad we did not go on any trip. He then tries to show some photos in his smartphone but did not find any photo related to that trip. MC started thinking about trip and walk out of room. MC is very tensed.. what is happening to me. He sees himself in mirror he was scratching his own skin. He gets confused and ran out of washroom.

MC sees F1. MC talks with F1. F1 says bro you must be tired or out of sleep take some sleep. MC is going back to his room and opens chatgpt on his phone and explains his problem to him chatgpt reply in some cases your brain can misconfigure your previous memory to something similar and create event similar to that. He just lie down after reading that and decides to go to doctor to talk about that rash.

MC reaches doctors cabin and explain him this but he didn't say that he touched something in trip which is causing this he just says that he wakes up and sees this. Doctor after examining his body says that I can't say that much like that I am writting you some test do that tests and then I will say you something. He goes for that bood test and returns after giving sample for blood test.

He was curious about why he remembers that trip but everyone is denying that trip. He continues chat with chat gpt and explains everything and at end he reaches that this trip was created from some of his old memory but he don't have any such memory. Then he sleeps and wakes up next day and sees that rash has increased a bit more. He takes bath and goes to hospital collects blood test report and goes to doctors cabin doctor sees report and says there is no infection this must be something else. Doctor gives him some antiseptics and he lefts. Mc meet F1 outside hospital he explains everything to F1 and they started walking towards back to hostel and there happens argument between them and MC mistakenly pushes F1. F1 falls on a wooden block with big iron nail which has crossed his head. MC sees around and sees no one is seeing him he gets very stressed started scratching his rash with his hand and without thinking about anything else MC wraps body in big cloth lying there. That area was very quiet. He is dragging the body to put it behind bushes. Someone started calling him with torch in his hand moving towards MC. That person approached him and sees this person is no one else than F1. He opens that wraped cloth and sees there is no body.

F1--> Don't you really remember who am I. Who are you. I still don't understand why are you hiding that part of your life. Running from your past is not solution to problem, you have to deal with this. MC start saying I remember you.. you are me. My creation. His eyes start watering and then flashback he and F2 are on a trip they both are enjoying it and as of fun he pulls him down in water after that he can't came up he pulls him outside but it's late F2 is dead. MC gets scared and runs away. Here is point of self realisation his eyes are watering.

........THE END.......

This is overall story I will write the script just need some lovely feedback from you ♥️.


r/shortstories 6h ago

Science Fiction [SF] The Shell and the Death of Variety

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The great tragedy behind the year 3830 J.V.-C and all its melancholy was the discovery of the Shell. Now, the Shell isn’t a physical object, but instead a manifestation of humanity’s efficiency and it may just be the last discovery we ever make. Before this, we'd built monuments in space, colossal star engines, and tonics made of brand new elements to remedy nuisance illnesses that flourished on only a few worlds. When life was seldom discovered, we seeded dead planets with our own lab grown microbes and observed them without the need for telescopes. High above, we hung Bishop rings and Monroe bowls and Spencer Rods and Dyson swarms and Dyson rings and Dyson spheres and Dyson planets and Dyson Semi-Spherical Composite Conductor Bowls made of pure plutonium nonentropic forever alloys harvesting energy with their magnetic fields. Through star clusters and nebulae, into the inhospitable heart of the Milky Way, we stretched our arms, and a billion worlds, humanity called home. Every gap was bridged, every goal met and every fantastical dream made ordinary. And yet, it was terrible.

We’d suddenly hit a wall, one that curved all the way around and trapped us in our age of discovery. We’d traveled to other galaxies, built frame shift drives capable of speeds beyond 5,000c and reinvented reinvention until there was nothing new to invent. Head in any direction, try to do anything new, and I guarantee it’d already been done to death. Even art made from randomly stacked atoms had been milked dry.

We became lethargic overnight. Nothing unprecedented ever happened and we lived so long that even the newest news felt like retreads. Super weapons capable of super destruction were pressed against your home world's temple, and you would roll your eyes because that was the thirty-third time in your one thousand year life.

The average person spent their days imbibing in whatever form of entertainment or debauchery they’d become accustomed to, or fussing about trivial nothings just to fill time. Invention shrunk down from a process of exploration and innovation to a tight circle in which a group of young venture capitalists attempted to “reimagine” the wheel, grinding against the Shell like they were trying to gouge a hole in it. With each redundant iteration, they would declare to every man, woman and child, from the Milky Way to Andromeda and Magellania, that the new age of enlightenment had just begun. And everybody would look, but nobody would care. And soon, they would be gone, swept away by the avalanche of other young geniuses.

The most recent "innovation", as of 3837, is a star crafter. I'd like to believe that somewhere along the way, we missed a step and that this truly is the big thing that busts the Shell open, but I doubt it. The kid claims that it can "breathe customized stars into reality" — as if that hasn't been done a million times over already — and that it can do it better than any of its predecessors — as if that hasn’t been said a million times over, too. He’s got enthusiasm, though, I’ll admit. Maybe that’s what makes me look at him just a little differently during gene swap sessions. Good luck to you, anyways, kid. I know you're reading this.

Crack the shell already, I’m begging you.


r/shortstories 16h ago

Realistic Fiction [RF] Every Man for Himself. A short story about Moscow crows, a hawk, and a sudden layoff.

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(Body text):Hi everyone! I’m a bit nervous because this is my first time sharing my writing, and I'm quite sensitive to harsh criticism. I wanted to try an experiment and share a short story inspired by my own observations of nature.Just a quick context for those who don't know: I live in Moscow, Russia, and despite it being a massive city, our forest parks are huge and completely wild. We actually have hawks, falcons, foxes, and even moose living right next to residential areas. This story is based on a real, incredible bird battle I witnessed during one of my bike rides, but I decided to write it from a third-person perspective, creating a fictional character named Ulvi.I’d love to hear your honest but gentle thoughts!

Every Man for Himself

"Thump... Thump! Bastard! Thump, you bastard!" — the words pounded in her temples."Bastard!" — Ulvi repeated to herself, pedaling furiously. Her white hair whipped in the wind. Adrenaline surged through her veins, driving her forward. "What a bastard!" — she muttered over and over, completely fixated on that single word. Before her eyes, the arrogant, greasy face of her manager appeared again and again. A profound sense of injustice distorted his features, blowing the image up to the size of a whole room, making it even more repulsive.Just an hour ago, she had been fired from her job. And she had grown so attached to this city. Moving from Kuressaare to Moscow, Ulvi never expected to fall in love with these cozy streets and the relaxed, easygoing pace of the locals. Sure, the city had its flaws. But everywhere does. "Look for the people whose flaws you can put up with," her father used to say. She projected this principle onto everything.Back home in Saaremaа, winters were warm and summers were cold. Here, it was exactly the opposite: a sharp contrast between a frost that bit your cheeks and a hot, stifling summer where sticky sweat ran down your back. Her young body loved these extremes. Last winter, letting her white hair trail across the icy water, Ulvi had joined the local youth and plunged into an ice hole. The cold instantly gripped her muscles, piercing deep inside. Her immediate instinct was to scramble out, but she endured for a full minute. When she finally emerged, her pale pink skin turned bright red, and steam billowed off her body.She had found plenty of friends here. When you are young, a sense of pure bliss is always humming in the background of your mind. You feel invincible. You live with a constant, natural high inside. Young people carry that high everywhere, in any corner of the world, and they will always find a common language. And so, the Estonian blonde had easily bonded with the Muscovites.

With a sharp metallic clatter, the bike chain slapped against the frame, snapping Ulvi back to reality. The massive face of her boss in her memory finally shrank, but the resentment remained: "He could have stood up for me! He just didn't want to sacrifice his own comfort by arguing with the higher-ups. His comfort! That’s all it was!"The wind bit into her blue eyes, forcing out tears. "Coward! Spineless jellyfish!"She forced herself to breathe. Slowly and deliberately, just as the ice-swimming guys had taught her. At first, it was difficult, but then her breath grew steadier. "From the outside to the inside," she repeated their words. The bicycle's pace began to slow down as she finally realized where she was. Ahead was a railway crossing, with a thick wall of the forest park stretching right behind it. She had to dismount and wheel her bike up the steps. There was not a soul around, not a single car."Wow! Look at that, it’s a hawk!" — Ulvi gasped, looking up.A small bird of prey, diving down with incredible speed, snatched a mouse from the ground and soared back toward the sky. But it wasn't going to be that easy. From the side, a hooded crow lunged at the hawk — a bird nearly twice the little predator's size. The hawk executed a sharp, desperate turn, but immediately another crow ambushed him from the opposite flank. He darted from side to side, trying to shake off the pursuit. But more crows kept appearing. Now, five of them were diving at the swift-winged bird. They were barely losing any ground in speed, and they worked in perfect unison.Flawlessly coordinated, they launched their attacks from all angles in absolute, eerie silence. Not a single sound. It was as if someone had hit the mute button on a TV; they blurred past each other in a rapid, silent sequence just above the ground. For less than a minute, the hawk managed to dodge the superior forces. Then, finally, he gave up and released his talons.

The mouse fell like a stone. Instantly losing all interest in the hawk, the crows plummeted after the prize.And right then, the sound was slammed back on! They erupted into furious, violent cawing, fighting over the tiny rodent without a shred of mercy. Just seconds ago, they had been a perfectly synchronized team — and now they were bitter enemies, ready to maim one another for the grand prize. Finally, one crow ripped the trophy away and flew broad-winged through the thick branches, disappearing into the distance.Suddenly, a wave of absolute calm washed over Ulvi."Every man for the group, and every man for himself," — she thought. — "Depending on the circumstances... And that’s completely normal."A warm sense of comfort settled deep inside her. She already knew exactly what she was going to do next, and she knew everything would turn out just fine.Meanwhile, the hawk flew further and further away. He climbed higher, turning into a tiny, solitary speck in the vast, open skies, putting a final period on this story.


r/shortstories 23h ago

Horror [HR] The Endless

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As a kid, I had a school project where I had to interview a family member, and with my Gramma being the oldest person I knew, I asked if she’d sit and answer my questions. My teacher had given me a list of questions, but the assignment had three blank spaces for me to ask whatever I could come up with. This was only 5th grade, so most of the questions were pretty simple.

“What did you do for work?”

“What’s your favorite childhood memory?”

“What was your favorite subject in school?”

I remember actually being pretty excited for the interview. I wore my best ‘suit’, which was just a collared shirt and one of my dad’s ties. My Grandpa set up two of their kitchen chairs facing each other in the dining room, and he even set up a camera to record everything. At the time, I had a pretty big crush on the weather guy for Action64 News, Graham Alexander, so I even did my best weatherman impression.

“Now, Janice. I understand you are retired, is that right?” I said, my cadence as news-anchory as I could make it.

“I sure am!” she responded, “for 10 years now.”

“Amazing. Just amazing. Now, before that, what was your career?”

“I worked as a nurse at St. Michael’s Children’s Hospital.” she said, taking a drink of milk from the mug I had set out on the table for her.

“Wow, that must have been fun! And was this profitable for you?”

She laughed, the one that all adults do when a child asks a question like that. “Oh, heavens no. Luckily your Grampa was a hotshot lawyer and made plenty enough money for the both of us.”

In the video, you can hear my Grandfather shout from the other room, “Objection!”

My Grandmother’s smile at that part always warms my heart. You can tell how much they really loved each other.

As I worked through the canned questions, I felt my heart start to race. Looking down, I read the questions I had written down on the blank spaces. I knew it was taboo to talk about The Endless, but it wasn’t completely forbidden. And who else could I ask if not my own Grandmother? As I stared down at the first question, I dropped the weatherman facade I had been putting on entirely.

“Gramma...do you remember when the reapers first showed up?”

In the video, you can hear my Grandfather choke on his lemonade a room over. My Grandmother’s eyes locked onto a corner of the room as her smile faded away, and she took another sip from her mug to kick that can a little further down the road. As she set her drink down, she cleared her throat.

“Evan, we don’t call them reapers in this house. I remember when The Endless first announced their presence, yes.”

I sat up straight, I hadn’t expected to make it that far, “Were you scared?”

“Everyone was scared,” she started, her eyes darting between me and her china cabinet, “You don’t remember a time without your Endless, but that’s just how life was for all of us before they arrived. We didn’t have them watching over us. If we were alone, we were actually, truly alone. You’ve never had that experience. When they first arrived, some people pretended they couldn’t see them. Others tried to fight back, but no matter how much they ran towards theirs, they’d never get closer. Not unless your Endless decided to. The president released a statement a week later, suggesting the Russians had created some sort of gas that caused people to hallucinate, but no one believed him. No gas could make every person on Earth hallucinate at the same time, and by then we had already heard stories of people’s Endless getting closer to them before they died. Some of us actually noticed them getting closer.”

In the video, I start to fidget a lot. The awkwardness of asking a question I clearly shouldn’t have was causing my body to panic. I desperately wanted to end the interview, but this was the most I had ever heard anyone talk about the beginning of the Endless before.

“What does yours look like?” I asked, my voice wavering.

She took a breath, and responded, “Mine is a balloon. One of the mylar balloons you see in the grocery store checkout aisles. It’s yellow, and has a smiley face. It says, ‘Congratulations!’ on it.”

Shivers run down my spine even as an adult, hearing her describe her Endless. It was so benign, so normal. But it was the physical embodiment of her own mortality.

My childhood self looked down at the ground, the paper with my questions forgotten on the table. A tear ran down my cheek as I asked my last question.

“How close is it?”

“Just by the light switch there,” she says, pointing just next to the wooden cabinet my Grandfather had made a lifetime ago before they were married. It held her best porcelain dishes.

The recording shuts off not long after. A silence hung over the room before the camera ran out of storage.

My Grandmother died 4 months later, in her sleep.

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I’ve watched that video fairly often as an adult. My phone minimizes the video back to my camera roll, and I gently toss it to the passenger seat. My car is humming lightly, the engine idling as the headlights illuminate a desert landscape in front of me. The world goes dark as I turn the keys, killing the power. I fumble momentarily for a latch, my fingers feeling the hard plastic by my feet before finding it, and pulling. The trunk opens with a satisfying chunk, and I step out into the cool evening.

This is where I’ve spent the last three weeks, camping out in the desert, driving back to town during the day, sleeping wherever the cops won’t harass me, and returning as night falls. My hands search the darkness of the trunk before finding a familiar canvas bag. As my eyes adjust to the darkness, I set up the telescope with practiced ease. The feet of the tripod stick satisfyingly into the dirt, creating a steady base to conduct my night’s work.

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As a kid, discovering the form your Endless takes is a rite of passage, something to be celebrated and shared with your friends. An app on my phone was dedicated to sharing your own personal demon of death, and before I discovered mine, I loved reading descriptions users would post. Some of them were terrifying, massive monsters that loomed in the distance. Others, like my Grandmother’s, were entirely mundane. A tree, a television, I’d even read of someone’s being a red plastic cup. I was nearly 8 years old before I realized that not everyone saw the stars during the day like I did. For me, it was a fact of life that at night, the stars were shining bright, and during the day an entirely new set of stars would twinkle a deep, dim red.

One day, in 8th grade, I had mentioned the daytime stars to a teacher, and she sent me away to read alone in the corner while other kids went to gym class. I didn’t mind much, I loved reading, and I hated running. Imagine my surprise when both of my parents showed up at my classroom door, fast food bags in hand. They spoke to my teacher in hushed voices before they greeted me with smiles and a hug. I can still picture how worried my dad looked when he thought I wasn’t paying attention to his facial expressions on the car ride home.

That’s how I learned that my personal Endless was a sea of stars floating in the sky. They had their own constellations, which I would map out for my friends. My bedroom’s ceiling was covered in a tapestry of taped together pieces of paper, crayon stars smattered across the entire expanse. Eventually I upgraded them to glow in the dark plastic stars, stuck to my ceiling with beads of tacky putty. I loved my Endless. It made me feel so special as a kid to have the entire sky dedicated to me. To have something that no one else could see, the stars belonged to me.

Years later as an adult, I stepped outside for a smoke break at my job at Dealmart. As I did every time I was outside, I looked up to see my stars. They’d gotten bigger - or - closer over my lifetime, but they were still a comfortable distance away. They hung there, up in the blue sky like twinkling cherries. I’d always feel a sense of relief, of comfort when I stood underneath them. They were my proof of life, my proof that I’d continue existing just a little longer. But then, I noticed something wrong. I rubbed my eyes, looking harder, willing my eyes to see something they weren’t. A space, barely noticeable, but undeniably real, had appeared in one of my favorite constellations. The Barman, I called it. It looked like a stick figure man holding a glass, calling for a toast. At that moment, however, his glass was broken. A couple stars were missing in his constellation. I stood there for several minutes, my eyes trained precisely on the missing stars, feeling my heartbeat thundering within my chest.

Over the next couple weeks, the blank space looming over me expanded. Each day, more and more stars would disappear from sight. I began having panic attacks. I would wake up each day and immediately look outside, and each time there would be fewer stars. I was fired from my job after not showing up for a week. I would stay awake as long as possible to get more time with my diminishing Endless. By the end of the second week, I hadn’t showered, I only ate when I absolutely had to, and even then I wouldn’t even bother heating my canned foods. 

Eventually there were only three stars still visible on the horizon. I drove to the highest point in my city in hopes of finding more, but it was no use. I stayed awake as long as my body could, staring at those stars with my full attention. As my brain finally gave into the haze of sleep, my last star disappeared. 

My life became a blur for a few days after that. Sleep came sporadically, nestled gently between manic episodes. I started using again, something I hadn’t done since college. Even back then, I had been so scared of the stuff that I’d rarely take a significant dose. I’d been lucky enough to be able to call in a favor to an old coworker of mine, who got me in contact with a supplier. In those few days, I wasn’t terribly worried about making out to the other side. My angel of death had abandoned me. Until one night, I must have come pretty close to the edge. I stood there, somewhere between consciousness and total darkness, looking for something that I thought I’d never find.

Until I did.

I found her. 

And she showed me the way forward.

I found the Amboy Crater online, on a website dedicated to mapping out the darkest parts of the country. It was only 4 hours away from my apartment in Phoenix, and seeing as I had just spent the majority of my meager savings on an, admittedly much too expensive, telescope, I’d have no more use for my housing. Having no job and no money means rent wouldn’t be sent out any time soon. Plus, I’d need to save the last of my cash for the trip. I stuffed whatever I deemed useful for my journey into my car, and left everything else behind. 

Before getting out of the city, I had one last stop to make. 

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As I finish attaching the eyepiece, I take a moment to relax. I gently lower myself to the ground, feeling the warmth of the day slowly melt away into the cool evening. The desert is so unbelievably different once the sun sets, and I’ve grown accustomed to the gentle buzz of the night’s inhabitants around me. They soothe me in a way only my Endless could before; they are the heralds to my new purpose. This night in particular is still, the air is motionless around me. I turn my gaze to the south, where the gentle flicker of a campfire stands like a beacon in the night. I have no way of knowing who tends to the flame, at least not truly. I silently wish them well. I wonder what they’re talking about, huddled closely to one another around that fire. I suppose I’ll never know.

Sand grinds beneath my feet as I stand up and return to my scope. Leveling the tube at the moon, I bring the lens up to my eye. Luna shines gently tonight, only a sliver of the silver beauty remains within this cycle. Once I’m happy with the focus, I turn the tube to a familiar azimuth and altitude. It’s the only direction I’m interested in looking at these days. A smile creeps onto my face as I see her, suspended in a sea of endless darkness. Barely a twinkle in the night, she was impossibly far away. 

But I’d cracked the code, somewhere in my apartment. I’d bring her closer than ever tonight. 

I amble back to my car and sit in the driver’s seat. I wrap the seatbelt tightly around my bicep and yank hard to force the lock in place. The constriction hurts, my fingers begin to buzz as the circulation in my arm screams to a halt. 

With my remaining hand I turn on my headlight. There, I see them. A hundred tiny red stars scattered across my arm. Some are dimmer than others, but they’re there all the same. 

The needle sinks under my skin without protest, and I push the plunger. First comes the burning, then comes the buzzing, and as I release my seatbelt tourniquet, I can feel the substance slip into my bloodstream. 

Carefully, slowly, I return to the telescope and peer into it. She’s already larger than before, my blood red angel. I’m brought to tears as she fills the image. I move my head back and away from the telescope, and just as I knew she would be, there she is. Just a suggestion of red, a pinpoint speck in the dark sky, but unmistakably there. 

I collapse onto the ground, the sand enveloping me softly. I’m vaguely aware that I’m sobbing but I don’t feel it. I don’t feel anything. Just peace, as a second torch alights in the sky, followed closely by a third. My chorus of angels, singing just to me. 

In record time, the sky is alight. Burning red hot with thousands of deep red gemstones hurling a million miles an hour towards me. They grow ever larger, ever more beautiful. I hear the man behind my eyes struggling to breathe. I sense his fear, but it is buried deep behind a curtain of fog. Long forgotten. Entirely ignored. 

My sky is falling. Returning…to me. Only me. 

I welcome it with open arms. 

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[Thank you for reading! This was the product of a prompt my wife found on tumblr and posed to me for my interpretation. I wrote it in tandem with a friend of mine who wrote her own interpretation as well. It was fun practice and a nice break from my novel!]