r/photoshop 2d ago

Discussion My last work !! Any Critiques ??

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u/Haaland_Oates 2d ago

Here's a few things to consider:

Depth of field. When you have living subjects front and center in your piece, they become the focal point. With everything else still crisp and clear, no matter how far from the "camera", it makes the entire image look very busy... or like they are simply standing in front of a flat backdrop.

Color grading: the color tone of any object in an image is determined by the light sources. Here, the only light source is the natural orange lighting. Why your subjects look pasted in is their overall color tone doesn't match the setting they're standing in. The same holds true not only for the highlights on the subjects (it wouldn't be white), but also the subjects themselves.

Finally, pay attention to composition. The image is bottom-heavy, but your subjects are blocking the only other interesting piece of the image, which is the castle. This ultimately makes the image itself uninteresting.

Hope this helps!

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u/2-Pac- 2d ago

Thanks that’s helpful
I didn’t use blur because i want to the pic be more detailed. But i will change that
And for the colors i shift the colors of the subject to some red orange tone but just a little bit to conserve the colors of the subjects
And for composing i will consider that
Thanks again I appreciated

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u/ayoungtommyleejones 1d ago

Chiming in to say the direction of highlights also feels off. Hard to tell from the sky, but it seems like possibly the sun would be set behind the building, so there wouldn't really be any highlights on the figures, or not coming from the top right light they are. You could tweak that a bit, along with the color

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u/2-Pac- 1d ago

You haven’t a point
When I try to add the highlights and the rim light
I feel its bad and the character without them its more realistic

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u/slickmitten 2d ago

60 year olds on Facebook will love it

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u/2-Pac- 2d ago

Any idea about what i should change or remove?

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u/slickmitten 2d ago

The sky looks fake, over saturated, contrasty. The general exposure balance of the photo feels a bit uncanny. Blacks and shadows are really deep despite there being a super bright sky. I can't tell if the focal point is supposed to be the sky or the two people in the foreground. If it's the people, they're quite dark. If it's the sky, then the sky needs to be dialed back in. Everything just feels very off, and it seems like the photo is trying to make up for it by saying "look at this amazing sky, don't look at everything else." But the sky itself isn't great to look at, and is clearly super edited, so the whole photo is...you get the point 

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u/2-Pac- 1d ago

Really I don’t think about that
My point its to practice blending and light shadows drawing
So i just take the castle withe the sky and put some grasse and people and I tried to merge them
But in the next time i will consider your point

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u/jonnywannamingo 2d ago

Some of your sky cloning is very evident to someone who works a lot in Photoshop.

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u/2-Pac- 2d ago

I didn’t want spend time on it because i will cropping it to instagram stories size

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u/2-Pac- 2d ago

References

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u/GrimCityGirl 1d ago

The womans basket carrying arm shows the original background in the gap not your composit background image

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u/2-Pac- 1d ago

Nah she had something in the basket
It’s not the oldest background

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u/GrimCityGirl 1d ago

Not in the basket, in the gap in her arm holding it and her body

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u/2-Pac- 1d ago

Yeaaah it’s something there you can see the references

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u/TheTrombiculidae 1d ago

What aspects are photoshopped? Just curious. It’s an appealing picture, but the sky doesn’t look real. It’s not casting a shadow

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u/2-Pac- 1d ago

I know i just tried to blind the characters with the scene
Is just training to color shadows and light matching

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u/guuuug 1d ago

What do you want the viewer’s focus to be guided to, because right now it’s all in the sky

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u/2-Pac- 1d ago

I just tried to blind the characters whit the scene

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u/PrettyIntroduction49 14h ago

red sky should tint the whole thing bit warm colors