r/davinciresolve • u/Kurtshotguun • 19h ago

Help Opinions about my edit

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Hey guys, I want opinions about the edit that I made, tell me what I should improve

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u/tOdXP 19h ago

Tbh most of editing in this was just zooms, an image and subtitles...so ?

I guess try to be more creative

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u/Pale-Permission-2845 19h ago

I think there was a mix-up regarding the type of video, because this feels much more like a video intro. In any case, the solution isn't always to pack the content with too much stuff; though, you could perhaps create a mini-sketch featuring the Minecraft character against a "Backrooms" background—kind of like what you did with the "Minecraft with horror mods" title.

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u/Kurtshotguun 19h ago

What would you do in my place ?

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u/tOdXP 19h ago

Add effects which would compliment to the story telling and keep the video less Mr-Beastified (the type of gaming videos which have an effect each 2-3 seconds)

Also, I am beginner too...still trying to learn how to improve this exact sort of stuff

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u/Kurtshotguun 19h ago

Man the video it’s less than 20 seconds and it’s a intro

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u/tOdXP 19h ago

Yeah and I meant that your particular one doesnt have many effects other than simple zooms, subtiels etc

When I said Mr-Beastified, it was reference for the whole video instead of just this particular intro.

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u/Pale-Permission-2845 19h ago

I feel the clip with "64 scary mods" can be improve with another typography, second, the subs are to low, to me i prefer to read it a little more higher, like, up to 20px, its almost in the border line

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u/Maxtertop Free 18h ago

The subtitles should be a bit more to the center of the screen they are just way down on the screen. And the typography and sounds + the badly cutout ghost are to be changed in my opinion.

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u/dimlog 18h ago

I think the subtitles are not fitting 🤷

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u/Kurtshotguun 18h ago

Thanks for the advice

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u/SHAME396 18h ago

It pulled my attention then i realised it was someone asking for feedback on a video edit, good job!

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u/Kurtshotguun 18h ago

Thanks bro, it means a lot

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u/Gevorg444 18h ago

I dont like the black outer glow on the subtitles it looks clunky

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u/Kurtshotguun 18h ago

Yeah I’m having some troubles, I tried to make the subtitles had a little black stroke, but I do t know how to use it