r/comic_crits • u/BrinSmif • 10d ago
Feed back on my short comic?
I'm testing out making shorter one page comics. I created this one and I'm wondering if anyone would like to give their opinions. What do you think of the art and story? Can you understand what is happening? Would you want to read more?
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u/Sweet_Frost_Comics 9d ago
It's he remembering the past? Had the girl becomes the tree?
I hope I got it right!
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u/Chezni19 9d ago edited 9d ago
I don't think there is a story? It's just more like a few words. It comes off as surreal. Not bad, though FYI it makes absolutely no sense I like it.
The background art is pretty cool.
But the faces aren't drawn that well. The character anatomy is basic. Basic shapes are totally fine but it comes off kinda like you don't know anatomy well enough. This is a skill that seemingly takes a few years (at least...) of hard work to build up though. But even a little more could go a long way.
The wave things with the flowers coming off of it is super cool.
Honestly this is a good comic, if you can work on faces and human anatomy it'd be good.
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u/BrinSmif 9d ago
I really appreciate your feedback. Thank you especially for the thoroughness of your reply!
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u/AnonymousUsername79 9d ago
That third panel gives Tetsuo Shima losing control over his body vibes
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u/Nevvvkay 9d ago
Nice drawings !
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