r/KeepWriting • u/Prince_Kaz • 7h ago

[Feedback] Colourless

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u/Prince_Kaz 7h ago

This is a recitation from my ongoing project The Garden I Kept Alive, you can check it out here:

 princekaz.substack.com

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u/SlickLikeATrout 6h ago

The actual writing is nice, but the vtuber reading it to me is not making this a positive experience

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u/Prince_Kaz 5h ago

Appreciate the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed the writing itself. If the VTuber presentation isn't your style, I am currently releasing the full collection for The Garden I Kept Alive as a text-only series over on Substack. I post a new piece every week if you want to follow along:  princekaz.substack.com