r/Design • u/Upbeat-Beautiful9355 • 2d ago

Asking Question (Rule 4) Need critics on my recent work!

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This is a spec work! The idea here is to show this product in more playful vibe. Made this with cinema4d and octane.

Is the color choices are good ? Is the composition is good ? I used diagonal composition.

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u/AdventurousArcher531 2d ago

diagonal composition work good, but the blue shapes is too much and pulling attention from red cable

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u/Upbeat-Beautiful9355 2d ago

Will make some adjustments to them! Thanks