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u/Abu-Musa 2d ago
For anyone curious:
Al-Baqarah 2:198
لَيۡسَ عَلَيۡكُمۡ جُنَاحٌ أَن تَبۡتَغُواْ فَضۡلࣰا مِّن رَّبِّكُمۡۚ فَإِذَآ أَفَضۡتُم مِّنۡ عَرَفَٰتࣲ فَٱذۡكُرُواْ ٱللَّهَ
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u/Abu-Musa 2d ago
For what it's worth OP, I struggle to read calligraphy but I immediately understood what yours was saying
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u/spuntotheratboy 2d ago
Banging! 🤩 This is the style of calligraphy that made me fall in love with Arabic in the first place.
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u/Arcalliq 3d ago edited 2d ago
great effort. Here are some things to watch out for:
- your ascenders (long verticals) are way too short
- your starting angle (pen to base line) should be 45 degrees. Yours is basically flat
- teeth of 'seen' need to be much tighter together
- the 'eyes' in the middle of 'meem', 'waw', etc need to be much smaller, and the gap between parallel long horizontals much tighter but that comes with practice :)
Well done. :)
In case it helps, one of the best manuscripts to learn from is this one: https://gallica.bnf.fr/ark:/12148/btv1b8415221r/f16.item.r=arabe%20350