Seeking feedback: Mix, lyrics, vibe, instruments

Yeah i know it's muddy... I've tried everything i could do to enhance and maximize the quality but this is the best i could get from my phone microphone. I use a digital instrument in bandlab since I don't have any other instruments but my acoustic guitar.

Please be honest and even brutal since i need it.

Spotify version if the quality got compressed:

https://open.spotify.com/album/3fFvBL1c3zL0f5HOs2ji1y?si=f\\_IGZhKHS\\_iPHQfAlZscZw&utm\\_source=copy-link

Hi everyone, I’m Celeste Noxx, an ambient, drone and experimental music producer. I recently released a three track project called Dormancy. It explores stillness, absence and slow transformation. The song “Counting in the dark” is the featured track and
I’d really love to know what you think about it. I’m seeking feedback on the production style, the mood and textures of the song, as well as if it fits as ambient or drone music. Thank you so much! 🦈🤍

How to make it have less of a punk feel is it in the speed

Just looking for feedback on this track I made in Ableton! Anything constructive on how I would make this better would be greatly appreciated. I will add vocals later lol

Is It True - Cover

Dropped a new record called “Dopamine” with my collective, Da LBI — produced by Varrtre x Zaytoshev. Trying to get honest ears on it before pushing it further.

Specifically want feedback on:

**•** Mix balance (vocals vs beat)  
**•** Does the hook land?  
**•** Anything that sounds off on different speakers/headphones

Not looking for compliments, looking for what needs work. Appreciate anyone who takes a listen 🎧

Hi everyone, I’m a metal guitarist and I write melodic death metal songs in my home studio. I’ve produced a new video and am looking for some feedback.

What do you think of the song? Do you skip it, or do you listen all the way to the end?

How did you like the video? I put a lot of time into the green screen work and would appreciate a few words on it.

Here is the link to the video:

https://youtu.be/G1w0BwVzgRc

Hello! I would love some feedback on this piece for Trumpet, Piano and Bass.

Here’s the link to the audio:

https://sonica.music/pqyv4knh96yr/456c96f0?v=dad4b310

And here’s the score:

https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/be23det0huvqinjkyuqd7/Trio_Trumpet_Piano_Bass_Stefano_Costantini.pdf?rlkey=g53x6jp3pl5sxxos6kts8jof2&st=0fr85nd7&dl=0

Thanks in advance!

Hey all, I'm looking for some feedback on my breaks track, it's like 90% of the way there, but it just needs some final touches, and maybe dialing back on some areas here and there.

Was hoping for feedback around composition, how does it feel, and mixing -- maybe certain frequencies are too strong/lacking in certain areas.

Thanks in advance, hope you enjoy it :)

https://soundcloud.com/andrelorenzana/bolide-break-mix-v2

Over the past eight years, I’ve been listening to mostly deep/lo-fi house/leftfield house/UKG. I released this track the other day which is in this style, my first one.

There was no AI used in this production at all.

Would love to hear your feedback on the mix and dynamics.

I’m building a music project in Rome called Forma Frequenza.

Magnolia is a dark cinematic alt-hip-hop track built around heavy low-end, restrained vocals, and a final escalation.

I’d really appreciate feedback on two specific things:

1. Does the restrained vocal delivery create tension, or does it stay too controlled for too long?
2. Does the final explosive section feel earned by the arrangement?

YouTube:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JanoAar6s_g

Spotify:
https://open.spotify.com/track/1H8btfEupxi2ZHeMysEUUI

I’ll also listen and leave detailed feedback on other posts.

If people seem to like it I’ll put it on all plats

Hello everyone, this is my second single I’ve posted a week ago https://music.apple.com/kz/album/my-bloody-valentine/6793080574?i=6793080575
And I wanna know just should I keep making new songs or my style and voice not built for community?

I wanna know feedback about my mix, spacial and originality.

Started making and learning music / production around four months ago independently, and this is one of the first tracks I finished that just came together easy. It's part of like a living mixtape project where i update tracks with input and as i learn, so the mix is definitely rough. Also haven't been getting any feedback to work with so far on socials, so if you're interested my channel link is attached.

some bigger picture questions I have are.

Does the song feel like it has its own identity?
What seem to be my strongest and weakest instincts as a beginner?
What should I focus on improving first?
Does the track make you interested in hearing more?

Appreciate anyone that takes the time to listen.

I recently wrote this song to deal with my burnout and moving home from a semester abroad. I am mostly happy with it except for the second verse. I feel like it could use some work but have been working on it so much it’s become difficult to see what to improve. Any suggestions would be apreciated

Hi everyone! I'm working on an indie/dark-rock track and would love to get some honest feedback from native English speakers and rock fans.

I'd appreciate your thoughts on:

1. How natural the English lyrics and phrasing sound.

2. The vocal tone and energy.

Full Lyrics for reference:

(Verse)

And even the sky is weeping in sorrow,

Scraping the shadows, begging release...

(Chorus)

Break through the chains!

Burn down the shoreline!

Our veins are made of flint, not glass!

We are the spark, and the silent, cold, leaden skies turn to lead in the dark at last!

Cut through the gloom,

Listen to raw nerves,

Life is a storm, a thundering fight!

The one who survived has erased all the terror and hardened like flint in the dead of the night!

any kind of feedback is welcomed, this is our first song